From 97705b4d577fe90fb0d6551e987174055faddefd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Fen Dweller Date: Fri, 27 Dec 2019 10:06:42 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] More detail + fixed wrong non-sadistic line --- recursive-desc.js | 12 +++++++++--- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/recursive-desc.js b/recursive-desc.js index d70decf..dcd9b0b 100644 --- a/recursive-desc.js +++ b/recursive-desc.js @@ -1106,18 +1106,24 @@ function defaultPiss(container, macro, verbose, flat) { return [ "You sigh with relief as", "$VOLUME", - "of hot, rancid piss erupts from", + "of hot,", + pickString("rancid", "steaming", "fuming"), + "piss erupts from", macro.maleParts ? "your " + macro.describeDick + "," : "between your legs,", "inundating", container.describe(verbose), - "in a disgusting tide of yellow death." + "and melting", + (container.count > 1 ? "them" : "it"), + "them down to a boiling", + pickString("slurry of molten prey", "stew", "heap of charred slag"), + pickString("in mere seconds", "with terrifying speed", "like " + (container.count > 1 ? "they were" : "it was") + " tissue paper") ].filter(Boolean).join(" ") } else { return [ "You sigh with relief as", "$VOLUME", - "of hot, rancid piss erupts from", + "of piss erupts from", macro.maleParts ? "your " + macro.describeDick + "," : "between your legs,", "spraying down", container.describe(verbose),